Caught up since I put it on hold a while ago, but I’m afraid it’s still not doing it for me. It’s too messy in what it’s trying to convey.
The first arc was a pretty simple and focused premise and tbh mostly vibes, where 4 pages per chapter were more than fine.
In this arc it’s trying to juggle multiple things and actually exploring some more complicated things, all in 4 pages per week.
If the chapters were longer, like this one, I feel like it’d be able to develop better.
Caught up since I put it on hold a while ago, but I’m afraid it’s still not doing it for me. It’s too messy in what it’s trying to convey.
The first arc was a pretty simple and focused premise and tbh mostly vibes, where 4 pages per chapter were more than fine. In this arc it’s trying to juggle multiple things and actually exploring some more complicated things, all in 4 pages per week.
If the chapters were longer, like this one, I feel like it’d be able to develop better.